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figured Id just paint this for fun and not try and focus on making it great and I find that this came out looking better than pieces that I try real hard on.

gimme some critique, I be hungry for improvments.

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Definite improvement. It feels a lot more confident and definitely more dynamic.

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thanks man Im gonna try a few new things tomorrow and see what i come up with ^^

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Now I truly understand what you mean, we [as artists] should be confident when painting or the piece will end up reflecting the way we feel as individuals, I should be more cheery when painting.

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This came out great. Sometimes think that when we artist 'try' we fail, when we just 'do' we make really good stuff.

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Looks raw and full of energy.
Since you've asked for critique I shall give:

-In terms of motion, you've got the hair flowing one way, and the scarf billowing out in the other direction... this is sort of conflicting. Of course you can ignore this comment if your character is using super hair gel.

-The legs seem a tad bit off. The left foreleg seems too short to me.. the right leg is also kinda weird. It looks like an indecision or compromise between two different poses. If you wanted that leg to be shown as bent outward in the direction opposite the viewer, the foot should be farther ahead of the left foot, not on the same level. If you intended the right foot to be on the same level as the left foot then the right thigh should be lengthened and the entire pose angle would shift upwards a bit.

Anyways, if that's meaningless jargon to you, I invite you to ignore it. Great job as always. =D

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cant wait!


oh btw if ye got mario cart... 0431-4025-9367 :D, lol forget if you sent me your code, if ye did =( i lost it lol
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The thing is, your feelings atm.
Just trying it to be more realistic wont make it better, ya see you go for a fun and sand, stones, leaf's and muscles/character pose came up almost like a picture.

But you wanted a realistic look on Warmech and even tought it looks pretty realistic, it still smiles like ''Hi! I'm a drawing ya know?'' ^^;

I know that i suck, but even while i'm happy a hedgehog or pose cames up absolutely greater than my usual art, when im feeling like a crap , my art is just a crap.

Dont dont feel down, i'll make you go worse :hug:

I'll support you bro, you're already an expert, being a pro isn't that far when you compare with a novice (not even a regular) like me ;)

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thanks man I had a real hard time getting the right leg to look correct I'll be sure to heed your words for my next crazy leg pose :)

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